That was really funny. I love this Prince Charming!
boii... Oh my gosh, I laughed out loud! And people looked at me funny...aha. :] I really hope you update soon.

Wow. That was awesome! I swear, some of those lines made me crack up!
Promise you'll update soon!

lol i liked this chapter it was funny and i can't wait for the next one

AHAHA! i loved it, ah i'd marry greg myself. hm, mrs. gregory charming? it does have a ring to it. anyways, you are uber slow at updating so go to your 2nd demension hell (cuz im only in the first and you wont bother me there) and write another!

lol
this si funny

this story seems good so far and its funny too. hope the next chapter comes out soon.

Pretty good so far, I really can't judge at the moment as the story has barely unfolded itself. So far though, so good.
Just update so I can actually make a proper review!!
(I hope this give you the incentive to update faster, haha)
-wreckless.and.jealous

Oh, I feel bad for that kid. Very funny. I like the way you modernized a old time fairy tale. "I have bigger Twinkies to fry."

One thing on two words: You don't need the note in parentheses following the not so innocent words. Just put a capital "F" and a capital "B" and I'm sure people will get the point.