   Giggling Bugs 2009-12-13 . chapter 18Heyy Shadows Eve :P
Well i read yur story, all of it actually, in one go! It was so god! and well i also know that yu already started writing the second in the series, but i hope yu read this review :$ :D
Okay so on with the story... hehe.. Eva, shes cool i like her character and im fond of her abilities cuz yu see i just love anything that has to do with water :D and i like Julian awsell, cuz hes sweet and kind hearted even if he puts up a very stern and iced facade. The twins are.soo cutee though hehe they make me chuckle. And Aralyn is well misunderstood, well in the begining but i like her cuz shes still the caring friend in the group, despite being ignored before. But my favorite character would have to be Raylan. He didnt really have much of a significant part in the story, but i loved his spunk and his attitude is what drew me to like him. Hes arrogant, yeah(no duh!), but i think he had more of a character building to him. I also wished Julian wudnt have come back (it wud have given the story more flare, in my opinion, and more depth and more meaning rather than a happy ending ya know?) I wud rather of have Eva slowly fall for Raylan :'( i like him more than anyother character (and i hope yu dont mind if i use him in one my stories :$) sigh i wonder if he will be in the sequal, im gonna start reading that tonight though lol...
Umm soo yaa sorry about how long this is... :$
I really enjoyed the story i loved it infact !
Keep writing and updatingg!!
--Ariyah |
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