I like the story so far. But it's a little annoying when you practically italics every other word. It should be used sparingly.

Okay, be mean, but hurry up or do everyone a favor and give us a when the next chapter is. Is it in one month? Two? Three? Ten maybe? I read your whole story in a day, I think it's a great story and I want to read more, but there's nothing to read!

pretty please update if you are able to :)

update please!

AHHHH! I I wish you would finish this! I've been waiting for ages and ages for the conclusion! Years, even!
I love you! I love this story! Please finish it! You're so close to the ending!

SOOOOO! Good! Please, please update soon! I physically _physically_need to read more. I think i've become addicted to this.

I was so afraid Cass would end up loving Ersades in some random twist! But... Youve managed to make an entertaining and... Cruel storyline, that tries to put a touch of reality as far as characters go, what they feel, how they react... I like this, and hope you'll update sometime soon... I am wondering if you're going to be elaborating on Ersades and his early life, or the world they live in, now that Cass has the ability to go out and explore without the sorcerer keeping her inside. This is quite the cliffhanger. I stayed up all night reading this, and I regret nothing!

AND THEN!? Update! I want to know what happens next!

Hmmm...about time something happened. Deffos lots of filler in the mid chapters, imo.

Anyways, on a side note: it's really great to see you mature and get better as a writer. Writing is much more polished and well thought out. Plot is starting to get interesting again, but the writing is a lot better than it was 30 chapters ago. Great job, keep up the good work!

Waiting with bated breath for your next update :)

If I give you virtual cookies, will you update?

I could not believe that this was updated, it blew my mind a little bit and I am still utterly enthralled with this story. Nothing has changed, I am still rooting for Cass and Ersades so much, and I am just hoping it won't be such a long gap in between chapters this time, pretty please! Glad to see you back on the net gracing us all with your awesome skill, thank you for sticking with the story I adore so much, understand how hard it could be, but it is well appreciated at least!

Oh, you just want to see me twitch don't you! What happens when all of his power is taken from him, other than being a human? Does he still remember or will he be blank and questioning?

I had suspected that his sister was up to no good. For some reason, it just seems that siblings like that always want more whether it be power or simply to be in charge.

I truly have come to adore Erisedes' character. I want him to be well. I want Cass and him to truly join in happiness because while she may not admit it, she cares for him too and it's not just the bond. The bond just planted the seed. I believe it's possible that Cass may have Erisedes powers and if she can find a way to heal him maybe the two of them care share those powers, live in that realm, have children, and perhaps find a way to cast Lorelei down to the Earth powerless where she cannot play the games that she has thus far.

I definitely want to see more with this.

Please get over your writers block so you can complete this story!:D its freaking AMAZING! I am obsessed with it! So much so that I read it within a 2 day time period :P

...dude! you're killing me! I want to read the next chapter already!