ahh i love this story so far... i wonder what happened between derik and cassie... i cant wait to read the rest.. all the characters seem to have a precise place in the story

great writing

GREAT STORY!

PLEASE UPDATE [A][S][A][P][!]

~Mo~

OH MYY GOD! You can NOT just leave me hanging like that! i can't WAIT for the next chapter. This story has kept me wanting more from the first chapter i read. INCREDIBLE! Please uopdate soon! :):):)

Oh my goodness, I love this story!

I'm so glad you made Cassandra so strong-willed and not all instantly in love with Ersades.

And despite his evilness, I also love Ersades.

Please update soon!

Hi!! I really, really enjoy this story, and I so cant wait till the next chapter! I really want to know what happens! Please update! Also, I love the way you write.

What the hell? I've heard of cats going crazy, but that is just insane!!

So, I just read this first chapter on "The Write Away". Oh, I'm sisterly_woes on Lj, btw. I really like this and am intrigued by it!

Um...I was just wondering...could you possibly review my stories when you have the time? 'Cuz they don't have very many reviews, and I want someone to tell me if they're any good and what I can do to improve them. I most definitely want the constructive criticism since I want to eventually write a book and I need to know how to fully develop my characters.

Thanks!

How does Cassandra have the power to control Ersades? Was she never actually human, but a Sorceress who didn't know it?

Hmm...

Probably not. After all, Lorelei probably would have known if she was another Sorceress...

Still. How did Cassandra, out of all people, single-handedly take off the cursed collar?

Hm...

~Mo~

OMFreakingG!

Although he is the bad guy, I do feel kinda bad for him... :(
I know I wouldn't want anyone to do that to me. That deciet... well, it must've hurt :(

What I don't get is why he doesn't act as sweet as he was when he was kissing her after she "consented" all the time. She probably WOULD consent if he was always so sweet to her.

~Mo~

hehe! Lorelei is like a burnt marshmellow. Crispy and black on the outside, but gooey and soft in the middle xD

~Mo~

I feel so bad for her :(

But, I have a question... If he wants her so much, why doesn't she just say "I wouldn't say yes unless you do this, this, and this..."?
if he wanted her so bad, wouldn't he do it?

~Mo~

Hey, I just finished reading your story, and I have to admit, ITS FING AWESOME! now, if you would excuse me, I AM DYING HERE! YOU HAVEN'T UPDATINGIN A LONG TIME YOU KNOW, AND SERIOUSLY, THE CLIFFY IS KILLING ME AND ON BEHALF OF ALL YOUR FANS HURRY UP AND UPDATE DAMN IT!

oh goodness!
you must update soon!
your story is simply wonderful!

So, I really like this story :) I appreciate that Cassie doesn't go all 'oh you touched me, I love you now' because that's always annoying ;)...

I have to say though, that I realy wish everyone would stop blaming her for taking a COLLAR off a CAT; or at least that she would put them straight and tell them off for putting him in such a non-threatening form and then letting him wander around free ainstead of putting him in a cage or something. They're all going on about her being human, and in the human world, you are allowed to uncollar a cat without deserving eternal enslavement and such.

anyywayss, that's my rant, but really, keep up the good work! I'm really looking forward to seeing how it plays out :)

I love it so much! please update again soon!