thats my artsy curly cue
i think you could publish a book
and you know how much i like crushing people with the truth
damn paper folding
who cares if it isnt a perfect pentagon

Oh, what gorgeous imagery. I love the emphasis on "fly," too, both putting it in its own line and bolding it. Beautiful. Keep writing! :)

So pretty!! I love the title. And the brevity.

short and simple but well articulated.

This felt simple and complicated at the same time. Though I suppose that's the same as everything else in this world, right? I liked it, though personally I could have done without the bold. And the last line seemed a bit vague, but it's ok to do that in poetry. The rest just seemed so straightforward that those last two lines were quite a contrast. Good job.