|Reviews for Acrostic Poems|
| simpleplan13 8/5/08 . chapter 2
Again the split between I and argue seemed a bit odd.
I liked this a lot. I liked how you connected it with the last piece by using the word blind. The descriptions are again really interesting. I also like how you picked an unusual word, makes the piece even more original.
| simpleplan13 8/5/08 . chapter 1
I like this, it's an interesting way to describe being blind and it flowed well. The only thing is having the word listen on it's own line read a bit awkwardly. I know you did it for the spelling and I'm not sure if there's a different way to phrase it, but just thought I'd mention it.
| In the Rye 7/31/08 . chapter 1
i think this one is my favorite. but i like how they all describe the word they are in more of a philosophical manner than just a dictionary definition.