i know exactly how you feel.

especially with fictionpress when i read so many lame attempts at stories because i can't find any good stories and i still want to read.

well done.

I love the extended metaphor that blankets over your entire poem. And that vocabulary of yours is to be admired. )

Hm...well I don't know of a title name, except for buffet and that sucks. But I love this. Love love love this