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| simpleplan13 2008-07-26 ch 1,  | abuseThe piece is sad and relateable it parts. I also like the repetition in the middle. However of the pieces you just posted this is my least favorite. There's not imagery or comparisons or anything, everything is just there, you know? It's still a good piece, but the others were more mature I guess. |