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| simpleplan13 2008-07-26 ch 1,  | abuseI think this is one of your best works. The whole fox imagery is really unique and adds an interesting spin to the whole mask thing. Though I do think maybe the fox thing could be expanded in the beginning so when you repeat those two lines it's not quite as repetitive. Also, I don't think this needs to be rated M.. lol. |