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Reviews For: The Mating
Catherine Chen 2008-07-24 . chapter 1
I enjoyed the simplicity of the story and the way you were able to make it entertaining and to get your point across without being explicit. The "tiger" element was a nice touch and I felt that you were able to use it well to enhance the story while still making the characters human and believable. Please keep writing. This was a wonderful story.

-Cat (please check out my work on fanfiction if you don't mind)
Existentialist 2008-07-24 . chapter 1
I really like how you didn't focus purely on the romantic part of 'mating' like most authors try to do. And in a way, I think this story can be applied to most women, not just tiger shifters--so I guess you would call that symbolism. I think it would be interesting if you expanded this into a short story, not just one little scene.
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