 BOOKFREAKAZOID 2009-03-31 . chapter 3update! |
 Poptart Guava Kid 2009-03-24 . chapter 3ahaha! yay sex in a labyrinth! i loved it the first time, second time just made it fun. *grin*
-thinks- now i just need to find me a labyrinth... |
 i-see-faeries 2009-02-17 . chapter 3Hm, I think this story has made me love Cade and Kalin so much more. I think they're adorable. Great. I can't wait to see more! |
 Sw33tR0ze 2008-12-27 . chapter 2I really hope Kalin will have a baby with Cade. I'm guessing this isn't finished, but please don't drop it! I'm also curious about what happened to Gab. Oh, yeah, I figured out why this story isn't following the first one. |
 Sw33tR0ze 2008-12-27 . chapter 1This doesn't, to me, follow the first story. Am I supposed to read Me and my vampire? to figure out what happened to Gab, or what? and is this complete b/c you have over the edge part 2. I just need some direction here. Please get back to me asap so I know what to read next. |
 Fictatiousrambler 2008-12-02 . chapter 3MORE! Haha. |
 Flaming Jello 2008-09-19 . chapter 5This chapter was amazing! I loved it and you rule! I wish i could write this well... i lose patience and such. ANYWAY!! This was fantastic and im stoning you right now (with love). So keep up the amazing work and rock out the the beat of your own drums!!
~dig it~
~F-J |
 Esquirella 2008-09-16 . chapter 5Now we get to see these Earthling demons. I just hope they get to Gabriel in time. |
 Royal Road Traveller 89 2008-09-16 . chapter 5omg, the poor boys *group hugs all round* please be safe, or at least safe as can be. |
 Kathleen Moon 2008-09-16 . chapter 5I have read the first two stories, am hooked, and can't wait until you update again. You are truly a great writer! |
 HigherMagic 2008-09-15 . chapter 5All I can say is that it's about freaking time! Jesus! You had me on edge all the way! I must know what happens! Update soon!
HigherMagic x |
 Rowan 2008-09-15 . chapter 5 It's already after 3AM and I really should be sleeping since I have to work in the morning but I saw that you updated and I just couldn't wait! It was definately worth it:)
I'm worried for Zeli and Orin trapped in a room with an angry mob at the door and only Xander and a weak Lyan to defend them. I hope those too can work things out and I'm glad that Zeli is going to be okay but I'm still disappointed in him. I'm upset with the sires too but like Cade I don't want to see them killed or dethroned. I'm curious about the long term effects of going over the edge and what happens when a demon goes over more than once.
Questions: If the bond with Pat is why he ended up in NY then wouldn't his bond with Lucian also work the same way? Where did his awesome plant weilding ability come from? Why has the council never approved of Lyan?Isn't Seyran in danger of going over the edge if he's forcibly seperated from Lyan? What are the life spans of the races and how do they age? How much older is Lucian than Gabriel?(Must be at least twice his age since Gabi wasn't born yet when Lucian and his brothers went to Earth before.)
It was a sad chapter but then it's a sad situation so that's to be expected. I'm glad that you're keeping the pace and not hurrying to make everything okay again. The sires actions tore apart the family and the nation. I'd be really disappointed if that had all been fixed in a chapter or two. I'm really looking forward to the modifications and more from Cade and Kalin's perspective:)
I know you just updated but I already wanna read more so please update soon and no more long breaks? pretty please with cherries on top? |
 Midnights Scream 2008-09-14 . chapter 5*sniffle* It's so sad! I don't feel inclined to forgive Lyan either though I understand what he's thinking. It's so depressing! glad you updated though! |
 Piroko Hatake 2008-09-14 . chapter 5Good story. I like how you didn't have everyone just forgive each other just like that. *snaps* MORE! |
 JtheChosen1 2008-09-14 . chapter 5this was such a badass chapter! i luved it so much!
reallyu, ur writing it perfectly, altho me being a angst **, i wanna see the kings suffer some more, b/c really, what they did was inexcusable. same goes for Zeli!
other than that, great work! |