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| Scarlett Wynter 2008-08-09 ch 1,  | abuseI guess that depends on your perception of reality. I like the simplicity of this. |
| Her Wishing Well 2008-07-25 ch 1, | abuseI love the simplicity of this, which reflects the mood as well. Great word choice, the author's note adds a taste of bitterness to the overall piece. I like. :) |
| smashmypumkinsx 2008-07-24 ch 1, | abuseit totaly does... great poem though |
| K. L. Kirby 2008-07-24 ch 1, | abuseI think I like... very well written |
| Ashelin 2008-07-24 ch 1, | abuseIt does, doesn't it? I liked the false calm in this, the feeling of every-day and normalcy, even if reality totally crushes every hope of that. Good job. |