I guess that depends on your perception of reality.

I like the simplicity of this.

I love the simplicity of this, which reflects the mood as well. Great word choice, the author's note adds a taste of bitterness to the overall piece. I like. :)

it totaly does...

great poem though

I think I like... very well written

It does, doesn't it? I liked the false calm in this, the feeling of every-day and normalcy, even if reality totally crushes every hope of that. Good job.