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Scarlett Wynter 2008-08-09 . chapter 1
I guess that depends on your perception of reality.

I like the simplicity of this.
Her Wishing Well 2008-07-25 . chapter 1
I love the simplicity of this, which reflects the mood as well. Great word choice, the author's note adds a taste of bitterness to the overall piece. I like. :)
The Exuberant 2008-07-24 . chapter 1
it totaly does...

great poem though
K. L. Kirby 2008-07-24 . chapter 1
I think I like... very well written
Ashelin 2008-07-24 . chapter 1
It does, doesn't it? I liked the false calm in this, the feeling of every-day and normalcy, even if reality totally crushes every hope of that. Good job.
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