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Reviews For: another day

Scarlett Wynter
2008-08-09
ch 1,
abuseI guess that depends on your perception of reality.

I like the simplicity of this.
Her Wishing Well
2008-07-25
ch 1,
abuseI love the simplicity of this, which reflects the mood as well. Great word choice, the author's note adds a taste of bitterness to the overall piece. I like. :)
smashmypumkinsx
2008-07-24
ch 1,
abuseit totaly does...

great poem though
K. L. Kirby
2008-07-24
ch 1,
abuseI think I like... very well written
Ashelin
2008-07-24
ch 1,
abuseIt does, doesn't it? I liked the false calm in this, the feeling of every-day and normalcy, even if reality totally crushes every hope of that. Good job.
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