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dkgreen
2008-07-24 . chapter 3
It's good! Though it'd be nice to have some translation for the Latin.
Koki Enwai
2008-07-24 . chapter 2
Ooh, captivating. And a bit haunting. Definitely intriguing thus far, but I'm wondering what's in store next.
Fine work. I can't wait for more!
- Koki
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