|Reviews for 23 Flavors|
| Anthony Tesla 12/23/09 . chapter 1
Hahaha, OK, that was cute. Very good XD
| YellowShootingStar 7/25/08 . chapter 1
Wow, this is such a good poem. I absolutely loved it! Great poem. Great job!
| ADSpencer 7/25/08 . chapter 1
Oh! I don't need specifics. Any person who has hung with friends knows already. . . Great job. Very sweet. Interesting way to get inspiration (from a cola commercial of all places).
| drafts of ka 7/24/08 . chapter 1
:D Fantastic, Captain, fantastic. The rhythm, the imagery, and the two lines to wrap it up at the end. I just wish my summer was as good as yours has been.
| ChapeauVert 7/24/08 . chapter 1
I love this idea! And the way you wrote it (being vague about whom you're speaking, but still giving specific examples)is awesome :)