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| Creative Jenius 2008-07-24 ch 1,  | abuseYou're a good writer, I can tell, because you're descriptive, but your writing needs some editing. By that I mean that there are a lot of grammatical errors. A LOT. And while it's still understandable, it makes it harder to read. One thing that I noticed is that you used "fulled," which isn't a word, where you should have used "filled," twice. But I can tell that, without the errors, you have a really good start. Best of luck (: Katie |