The way this is written, your words practically beg to be sung! Beautiful language, beautiful imagery - very lovely poem.

This seems so romantic and nostalgic, as though written in a different time, which I really like about it.

But I kind of wonder about the narrator, if he's dead or alive, because he claims to have all eternity. Still, there's a note of sadness, too.

And I like the lines: "Grey mists, it blinds nearly everyone

But it can’t blind those who don’t see love"

I liked it, very much (:
Katie