Zombie? Is s/he dead? :O Lol, interesting piece.

Ah, I can definitely relate to this poem some nights! Insomnia is so irritating. =/
I like the last line - I do indeed feel like a zombie following a sleepless night.

Keep writing. :)

I can identify with this poem. What I hate even more is being awake at four in the morning then dozing off and waking up late for school. GAH!

Nice job.

I hate sleepless night. Very enjoyable read. Awesome job. Thanks for the review. Write on.

Great conclusion. Very funny: "exhausted insomniac." I swear, fictionpress should really give sleep poetry it's own catagory--dreams and lack-there-of are so inspirational. Nicely done!

OH.MY.GUMDROPS! I HATE WHEN I CAN'T SLEEP! I've never had insomnia (sp?), but when I can't sleep it drives me off the wall. "to bask in the hours of nothing" was a good line to use, it helped describe the process of sleep to us. it kind of sounds boring just doing nothing for hours and hours and hours (and hours), but the way you make it sound, its a haunting and alluring choice for you, to so easily need it, that's what caught my attention.