"then shuffled out of her room and across her room to the bathroom" probably should have been, "then shuffled out her room, across the hall and into the bathroom." in the 3rd chapter.

Aside from that, this story is another unique entry on this site! I like the female lead, and oddly enough the story premise even though sports don't interest me at all!

I hope you continue this story, and update soon!

See ya!

This story is so mello and down-to-earth in a way. I love that. XD Anyway, this chapter was humorous, ha-ha. The little biography was really niteresting, and I love how her first true interest was a video game, Ahaha.

Anyway, I'm looking foward to more of this, I wonder what's in the package. :D

I like your new style. It does have a flavor of humor in it. And it's amusing to read. Though I couldn't relate to the prior chapter about video games, I can to this chapter in which you show a new side of the character.
Anyways, great chapter! I can't wait for more. This character seems like she's going to be loads of fun reading about...

(P.S: I'm sorry my reviews are soo...dead today. I'm so tired right now..I can barely move my fingers, heh. But I had a great time reading your stuff.)

Update soon!

Hey!

Alright, this story is just too cute! LoL, I love the main character, god her parents sound like mine -.- Yep, mom with weird threats. LoL

N e wayz, I'm so keeping an eye out for this ^^

-kai

Ahaha the character in chapter 2 reminds me of me. @_@ Like, I'll totally no-life on a video game for like a week...in fact, I think one of my characters on the game I play is level 93 as well...(wierd.) Anyway, I like the laid-backness of the girl. I really like that and I get a cool vibe when I read that she had that knid of disposition. *_*

+Alerts xD

I like the things said in the begginning (and of course the rest of the chapter, though I wish it was longer ^^) The words at the begginning, for me at least, left a laden weight as the reader. It was great!

I enjoyed reading the descriptions in the story which has enabled readers to visulize the whole setting perfectly. I can't wait to find out more about these characters and what awaits them! Great job! :)

Oh, this is different! But I like it nevertheless. The characters seem laid back but who knows what you "really" have in store for us. ^^ I can't wait to see how this will unravel. Good start! :)

^_^ lol. That reminds me of when I was playing video games from three pm till one am without doing anything else. I can really connect with the character so that is awesome. =3 Very cool so far!

hope to read more soon.

Nice intro song. I really liked it. ^_^.

First review! (I hope XD)
Sounds like a good start (the main character reminds me of myself, sort of...), I'll be waiting for the rest!