 C. Hinton 2008-07-30 . chapter 1I have to say, I was immediately intrigued with the title, it has a brilliantly simplistic flare to it. Especially with the simple descriptor, like something you'd see on a classy movie poster.
It is interesting that you never divulge really what the 'knock' is or even if it is real. However the sense of tension is a bit lacking in this tale.
I'd recommend building the psychosis of the narrator up a bit, give him a reason to be hallucinating this strange knocking, some suspicion that it might be something malevolent. |