|Reviews for Glass|
| a silenced revolution 8/13/09 . chapter 1
i like the morbid tone in the last line.
| drops of rain 7/10/09 . chapter 1
Bravo for the word choices.
| Frosthold 6/12/09 . chapter 1
Beautiful. I love it when poets take something so ordinary as this and make it into a great poem!
| fatbird33 2/2/09 . chapter 1
o very nice last line. great descriptions throughout!
| Isca 1/24/09 . chapter 1
It's choppy, but you know what? I like it works well like that, as it shows the 'edgy, sharp' nature of glass. :)
| shekherezada 12/31/08 . chapter 1
| stolen hugs 12/29/08 . chapter 1
love the imagery. so simple, but yet so utterly complex...
| gg. lass 8/1/08 . chapter 1
i like it.
the last line makes this poem very realistic and blunt.
yours until the wind changes,
| hoira 7/30/08 . chapter 1
I'm a lover of color, and I like how you apply that to the title, Glass. :)
| JD Kirkland. Taurus Land 7/25/08 . chapter 1