i like the morbid tone in the last line.

Bravo for the word choices.

Beautiful. I love it when poets take something so ordinary as this and make it into a great poem!

-Frost

o very nice last line. great descriptions throughout!

It's choppy, but you know what? I like it works well like that, as it shows the 'edgy, sharp' nature of glass. :)

i'm amazed.

love the imagery. so simple, but yet so utterly complex...

awesome job.

-anna.

i like it.

the last line makes this poem very realistic and blunt.

nice job.

yours until the wind changes,

gg

I'm a lover of color, and I like how you apply that to the title, Glass. :)

COOL...