happy.
excellent.

I like it. I think you spelled tour j'tai wrong. or it's something like that. Never mind. Yay!! I'm glad your writing again.

Wow, that's . . . deep. Very well done. I love it. It really shows his character well. Greatly detailed. :D And I love that song. Keep it upz :)
-Gabbie

Good voice. I like how he admits that he doesn't feel like a man when pushes his girlfriend around. And those are neat names for the characters.

~SirScott

wow. that was...great
i love the song face down, but this is the first time i've ever thought about it this way before...i don't think anybody's ever stopped to think about it from the abuser's POV. you captured it beautifully. Original, moving, and just so real. amazing job