 UnderxGravity 2008-07-25 . chapter 1I must say, throughout all of this, I wanted Marek to survive. Such a sweet guy, really. I felt like throwing a brick at Heather. If there's anything worse than someone who does bad things of their own free will, it's someone who can't acknowledge that what they do is wrong. False sense of self-righteousness.
Interesting situation here. If you had to make some people in a room die, who would you pick? What do you judge a person's right to live by? Past, present, or future?
What would you be willing to do in order to ensure your own survival?
M, sometimes it isn't necassary to fight to win now, is it? Sometimes we have to give in to win.
I could imagine a blood-curdling scream after Heather reads the last message or a temper tantrum.
You truely made a work of rt here. Besides a few grammatical errors, it's perfect. Realistic and alive. |