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Avalonia 2008-09-03 . chapter 1
I love this; such a strong poem for the point of view of someone who knows exactly who they are. A great response to pressure. I love the line 'Because I care doesn't mean I consent.'
fleur de l'est 2008-08-13 . chapter 1
This is vague, which is what makes it so relatable I guess. A very cold tone with a hint of sadness. (This is irrelevant but it kind of reminded me of the song "Tired of Being Sorry".) The whole thing about your paths crossing was really thought-provoking, though my favourite line is "And I cannot fit into your cupboard".

Anyway, great structure, almost like a dramatic monologue. I just loved the message, and how thoroughly you presented it. I shall save it because one day it will prove useful..

~fleur
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