Gotta love this!

I love this story! I really Really LIke this story!

I liked this chapter ^_^

Her life seems quite sad...Like the memory of when her mother left. :( So her and Ross are only half siblings? They share a dad and have different moms?

And about the wings, was she hallucinating? Or was she really flying?

Can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^

~Mizuki

Ok you got a good story. Minor spelling improvements are needed and all that good stuff. Everything else seems to be good so keep it up.

This is VERY interesting :D

Nick sounds like a really big jerk

I'm happy she dumped him :D
But what a waste of Chili :(

I love their door signs and the obvious sarcasm :D

This a great story so far, love it~!

~Mizuki

Ooh~! This sounds VERY interesting!

The formatting was good, and your grammar and spelling is certainly improving :)

Although, it seems like you haven't described the characters yet.

And what was with that guy who wanted to do THINGS with Joe? Is he important?

But anyway, great story so far! Keep it up!

~Mizuki

MOM! *don't call me* Ek... >.