super cute

omg i loved it! by the end i really was wishing you expanded it even further just because all of them were so cute and amazing

great great great!!

Very unique and very beautiful. Impossibly moving that not even mountains can withstand it. Absolutely stunning. I loved it.

This fic is probably the best I've read on here thus far. Everything from the concept to the character development are amazing. Bravo!

Aw. Sorry I'm not any more coherent than this. I think I already expressed my views when I reviewed this the first time it was posted. I think I had a long review then, too.

Completely off topic, but have you read anything by Jesse Hajicek? You might like him.

This story put me out of my comfort zone a little, but it was beautiful and wonderfully written.

Is this the second time you've revised it?

I should start keeping copies to compare the changes that you've made; I'm always curious as to what you feel needs to be revised (I had loved this story from the beginning, so...)

It was about time I got around to rereading it, anyway, so today is a good day to do that (and check out what changes you've made...!)

Cheers

Dear Gods that was beautiful
*weeps*

Oh man, I cried so much... But I'm glad you gave it a happy ending :)

THIS IS SO SWEET! I love it!

It's one of the best one-shots I've read.

That was awesome. I love the way you slowly revealed the characters and backstory while developing things between Ollie and Zacharias. It was really cute, in a not-cutesy, believable way, and very believable. Maybe it's because you crafted this in love for your sister, but it's really touching and simply nice. =D I loved it, thanks for sharing with all of us!

Ollie reminds me of Lenny from the book Of Mice and Men for some reason (such a cute character). love the oneshot =)

I like that oneshot of yours and just wanted to thank you for the enjoyable time I had reading it.

Aw.

To be honset, I was kind of like, "This is way too long for me..." because of my Shortest Attention Span Ever, but by the time I was halfway through it, I was wishing it was longer.

Aw...

I also wish I had something better to say...but I've been rendered speechless. Uhh... Oh, but I do like how there was growth with not only Z (too lazy to spell his name correctly) and Ollie, but with Port too. Plus I really like the name Port.

Ich liebe dich.

A-maze-ing story ^^ Sorry it took so long to read >,