Beautifully written.
Keep up the good work.
And try to update faster :)
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First time at first person?
I don't believe that. It's too good.
This is just amazing.

as usual i love your writing, whether it be first person or third. but i think this just may be my favorite. love it, keep it up!

I think this is easily the best story I've read in a very long time! I'm so intrigued and I love how you put across Travis' character..I'm still alittle unsure about Maria, but on a whole it's great! Can't wait for more ;)