I've never really understood the idea of using a (roughly) syllabic verse form in an accentual language, but I quite like this poem.

My reason for reviewing is of course not at all related to my inability to message you from your profile to point out the following:

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With enough numbers it is normally possible to find a quite simple relationship, so there's no need to worry about changing them.

lol! interesting...

those stars must be quite bright for that exclamation