Your story is interesting and I am intrigued of what will happen further in your story :) keep up the great work

Sincerely Nephilim Familiar

Good, good chapter! But, I did feel that you may have rushed it a bit, some of the details didn't seem to play out to me that well.
If the character was buried in a graveyard: you do realize that the coffins are buried 6 feet under? (i think, but i know its deep) The way you described her breaking from the coffin made me assume that it was only inches under the ground.

-Again, passive voice.

Other than that, it was great! I cant' wait to see how she'll adjust to this new life. :)

~nicola~

PS~ If you take the time to describe the sceen as it plays out and make the switch into active voice (if you want), why, I figure that I could be seeing this as a published work sometime in the near future. Keep up the good work! :)

Weird. I liked it though. :)
Just be carefull about passive voice (I did notice some 'was's) and try not to move the story too fast. Other than that. I'm interested!

Ciao!

~nicola~