You are alive right.?. You will update soon right.?. :-)
Il'm not a beta but if you want I could do the speeling annd grammar thing for you if your still looking for someone to do it.
I have a fpn account under the same name I just can't sign in on my fone at the moment so if your interested either look me up under hopeless romantiic or send me a msg at
Can't wait for the next chapter...you better update otherwise imma be vverry ** off.!. ;)

OMG!! I love this story. I didn't even read the 1st one but this is really amazing!!
Can't wait till your next update!

Youu need to update pronto!! lmao It is soo good!

i really wish you would update

WHAT THE HELL you leave off there!?!?!? I love this story and started reading it when you were on like chapter 7 and I'm so depressed you haven't updated yet! Please update. O.o

I really love this story and I wish you update soon! Warrick is being an ** and I´m dying to know who is the kidnapper

Gah! you leave off here?!?!?!
I just read all of this story (well, at least all that you have up here) tonight, and I'm loving it. I really can't wait to see where you take this! Please update soon!

Oh my goshi love this story and the first one, i cant wait for the enxt chapter! ill be waiting for the next one ;)

amazing. very nicely written.

dude. its been 6 months since u updated. wth??

wow! Totally love this story. I cried. I hope the deleted chapters aren't too much of a setback.

This story is really captivating and I love the depth in it. At first I thought it was going to be just another romance story but it's really different and I love the interesting plot. Please update soon(:

This is an interesting story! The plot line is good, the characters are well developed and there's suspense within the story. I can only hope you'll finish the story!

Well, how is she going to get out of that one? And why did Warrick act that way?
Well, I can see that you like using twists, but sometimes it's hard to unravel the plot afterwards. Oh, well, I'm sure you can face the challenge! Please update soon!

I just sat down and read this all yesterday. I didn't read the first one though. I stupidly hadn't realized this was a sequel until I was already way into it. Lol.

It's good! Very entertaining.

I felt so horrible for Jordan when Warrick said he never felt anything for her. Somehow, though, a part of me wants to believe that he realized someone was targeting her and was just saying that so he could push her away and try to convince whomever was after Jordan that he didn't love her or whatever. That's the hopeless romantic in me, though.

Jordan was smart in what she said to her kidnapper at the end. Although, it wasn't exactly anything good for Shannon, but Jordan just gave herself an opportunity to escape. Maybe even get enough to time to warn her.

And now, it's really bugging me because only a few people know about Warrick and Shannon. I'm trying to remember the descriptions from the guys on his squad, but just... gah. so frustrating.

Anyway, sorry for my rambling. Just wanted to review since I added this to my favorites :)

I really hope you don't forget about this story. Especially since it was left off on an awesome cliff-hanger.