Beautiful and touching! I loved the way it flowed like water cascading down a stream! Definetly a fav from me!

Love this piece!

oh! I loved this! so many girls can relate to this!
I'm guessing when it said 'but I'm afraid of the pain' that she's a virgn than?
and no girl should ever waste that on a one night stand.
as a matter of fact, i dont even get why ppl do one night stands. there has to be a love connection and all =D
but aneways, you did this wonderfully. it read so smoothly and i was intersted down to the last word.
so great job =D

This was beautiful!
It flowed really well and it held my interest.
You should do poetry more often:)
-Nayy