this was really well written. i like how you kind of turn it around from the "i hate you" to the "you don't know that i love you". also, the style that you wrote in was really good. it's almost like a letter, but not really. more like a one way conversation. if you've read YOU DON'T KNOW ME, by David Klass, it's kind of like the first chapter

i think... that you should write a follow-up... in which said arrogant, prideful guy kisses annoyingly denial-ful girl. or takes her to bed, either way. but you know, kissing is a tad more romantic, and less disturbing and scarring to young children. i'm just joking. you don't have to write a follow-up.

only, it would be good. i'm just saying, you know, it would. but obviously i like this as it is, it really doesn't need a follow-up. so, well, go you!

It's really nice, really. Like a note she'd give him, then strut away. As in "I really don't care, I'm over you."

HEHEHEH that was so funny... umm kinda remnds me of me... oops no what i mean someone else im so not like that ;) anyways i really like that it was very funny! R u writeing out of exsperiance?

aww cute!

Haha, very good. Yes, it's cliche, but you worked well with it. She's in denial. . . but not really. Very entertaining. Good job!

- Koki

hahaXDD
she so DOES love him :)
and I love your story :) it's so sweet, in that non-typical way
I'm a sucker for cliches
but I wanna know if he likes her back
will I ever find out?