Wow! I soo want it to be only some sort of a misunderstanding.. that Vincent was actually still.. alive? existing? just there!

It's an interesting story. I like the idea a lot. Not too much of a cliche vamp thing. It does have original ideas/twists/parts of plot etc in it. Keep up the good work!

Oh man, both of these stories were so depressing. Obviously good if I found myself reading them to the end... but ugh. I guess not all art is meant to satisfy the reader, and that by evoking an emotion from me in the first place you've managed to create art... but this ending left me kind of unsatisfied. I was alright with the last one knowing there was a sequel... this one kind of chafed my heart. It wasn't epic enough to break it, but it has now left me with an uncomfortable sore.
I really like your writing style though, and I think you should definitely keep writing. Thanks for posting this. :)

Wait a minute... I actually find it hard to believe this fantastic story has ended. There are still many questions left unanswered for me though.. What happened between Brandon and Nikolet when they went out of the mansion, looking at the fire?-- If Nikolet stays with Aidan now, where is Brandon? Is he just again bored with her after he destroyed Dominik's coffin? AND VINCENT!! IS HE REALLY DEAD? I DO REALLY BELIEVE HE IS DEAD. HE IS TOO STRONG TO DIE JUST LIKE THAT?! T_T

AND MANY, MANY MORE QUESTIONS... I feel like crying now.. YOu are a great writer, been following your works ever since Vampiric Nightmare.

WOULD THERE BE A PART 3? ^_^ PRETTY PLEASE?!

I'm so sad. I hated the ending. I can't believe he died.

But I loved your story.

He died..That's depressing, I really liked Vincent. Even in the first volume, I really liked him..and then he dies..I'm really sad now .. Well written, though, good work..

At the beginning of this chapter you went fromfirst person to third person and then back to first. Just thought you'd want to know..

:((
vincent...
wa
nice chappy, :( i just hope that vincent will come back (in my haed or in a nother sequel? *hint hint wiggle of eye brows* tee hee) from the dead...or undead...yeah that ^_^
i loved this story

will you be making any other ones(stories)?

i'm on quizzila as qtanimeluvr

Thanx!

Vincent can't be dead. I mean, I just refuse to believe it. He should come back from the dead and he and Nicole should live happily ever after--emphasis on the "happily" of course.
Really well-written, but I do wish he wasn't dead.
Great job!
~Mia

I loved all of your stories, including this one, but I can't stand the ending.

It seemed like a lousy way to finish the story quickly..

I really liked it. I actually found the last line particularly powerful. Good job.

Sorry, I don't have any other comments.

This story and the one before it were the best ones I've read on this site. Seriously, you actually have good characters that aren't mary sues, and your plots are really suspenseful and captivating. I'm just soo sad that it's over. Are you considering writing a trequel? lol. I'm sad that Vincent's dead but at the same time, I'm not. I was still mad at him for going through with turning her. I was really sad when Craig died in "Vampiric Nightmare," but that's what makes you a good author; you do the things people least expect and a lot of times don't necessarily want to happen. I really want to see a firmer conclusion with Nickolett. So I hope you consider writing another story with her. Looking forward to reading your future projects!

-Dramalover21

what the! No! you mean he is actually dead!! Vincent... but he can't die! its so horrible and upsetting

oh.my.gosh! that is SO sad! F-ing Brandon! ugh! WA vincent was awsome why did he have to die? Waa

you killed him off?? that seems so...strange after everything that happened? Now what?

Dissapointing..D;
I feel as this was rushed..
Like all of the sudden Brandon's there again..eh.
Yeah D: I wanted a slightly happy end..
But who's Aiden again? o_O;