Wow... I never saw the ending comming. It's horribly sad but an amazing poem. I liked how it was narrated, kind of in third person but also not. (and it wasn't confusing) Thanks!

really well done! I like this one! Sad, but really good...

omg, this was heartbreaking and depressing.
wut cheating does to someone...
and with her sister...
You did a fantastic job on this!

woah.
heavy,
but really good :)

Sad but very beautiful:)
But the jackass deserved it, cheating with her sister.
Poor girl.
-Nayy

Great poem. VEry well described! Just sometimes it felt like u just wnated words that ryhme , nt words that really fitted in! ANyways it was great