Wow! That was very deep for such a short poem! Like what the Jenius said, i do like how u used italics, bold, and underlining to emphasize the key words.
Good job!

I like that you use the bold, italics and underlines to emphasize your point. I have a poem like that.

It kinda sucks, though, that you find yourself stuck in a dramatic vortex. Still, makes for a nice poem (: