Hi, i owed you a review! i've been lazy these past couple of weeks so i didnt get round to it. I like the subject matter, its very close to society as a whole. I like how you used the generic plural pronoun "We" i could write an essay about this, and i'd be happy to if you like, but ill keep it short. Back on track. The reason i like it is because of the vagueness, it can apply to any group of people, especially in the first stanza where the ABCA scheme is very obvious. The last stanza made em grimace abit, only because the rhythm changes dramarically from the 6-7 syllables in verses 1-6 to double the syllables in the last two verses.
So be careful with that, it needs to flow all the way to the end and even then the last verse didnt end the poem well-if that makes sense. I felt as if i was waiting for more, since it lacked that note of finality.
I hope that was helpful. Good luck for the future, we aspiring writers must stick together!
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Fuzz

I liked this poem.

I like it. It says a lot in just a few words. Great work!!

In a odd sort of way, that was very down to earth. It was like a hidden description of what some people can be like.
I love it!

Great poem.