|Reviews for Wordless Speeches|
| Lime-Cat 8/16/08 . chapter 1
I didn't really like the use of ellipses in this poem because I found it unnecessary. I think a period would suffice in these instances of ellipses.
I really like the descriptions you used in this poem, though, because it was really beautiful imagery and it gives me a little bit of a mystifying feeling.
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