I found this piece to be lacking a little bit of quality that I've seen in some of your other works - this is probably because of the nature of this poem.

I liked the ending the most because the speaker finally reveals what the reader wanted to know throughout the entire poem.

Overall, I didn't particularly like this poem because a majority of it was repetitive and (excuse my bluntness) pointless. I understand that it is meant to be a little thought provoking, but unfortunately, it only tickled my curiosity a little bit. My enjoyment level on this particular poem wasn't all too high compared to your other works.

-silv3rdr34ms

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I like it a lot. Your a great writer, keep it up. :)

WAOH...i LIKE THIS ONE...ITS...ITS...ITS...I CAN'T EVEN EXPLAIN...BUT BOY U GOT A POINT...THIS POEM RIGHT HERE...IS MAD THOUGHT PROVOKING