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Reviews For: Color Theory
YasuRan 2009-11-17 . chapter 1
I haven't read a good Suspense fic in ages so THANK YOU for making my day! The allusions to color you worked into this piece were a nice touch. Gotta love ambiguity ;)
VelvetyCheerio 2008-09-09 . chapter 1
Oh, so he kills his clients by having them knit? That's kind of scary. Freaky. Good job. I liked the summary. It made me smile. VelvetyCheerio.
Carrollesque 2008-08-13 . chapter 1
Very well written. Well done. The shrink lacks any clear motivation, though.

Fifth paragraph, 'later' should be 'latter.'
Arydesia 2008-07-28 . chapter 1
i love your descriptive writing...you never say 'cass feels this or that', i can just tell her emotions from the words :) creepy, and a depressing ending, but it's a great one shot! please keep writing--i wanna read!

~arydesia
Koki Enwai 2008-07-28 . chapter 1
I love the ending the way that it is, so please don't change it! The creepiness factor is just amazing. It really takes talent to write something like this. Well done!

- Koki
8DaysTillSunday 2008-07-28 . chapter 1
Wow. Amazing detail, amazingly written. What else can I say?
It was amazing!
insanities 2008-07-28 . chapter 1
I definitely think that the ending works - it's my favourite part of this. But the whole story is 'creepy and tense', and I really like the pacing. It's also brilliantly written. :) *adds to favourites*
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