 YasuRan 2009-11-17 . chapter 1I haven't read a good Suspense fic in ages so THANK YOU for making my day! The allusions to color you worked into this piece were a nice touch. Gotta love ambiguity ;) |
 VelvetyCheerio 2008-09-09 . chapter 1Oh, so he kills his clients by having them knit? That's kind of scary. Freaky. Good job. I liked the summary. It made me smile. VelvetyCheerio. |
 Carrollesque 2008-08-13 . chapter 1Very well written. Well done. The shrink lacks any clear motivation, though.
Fifth paragraph, 'later' should be 'latter.' |
 Arydesia 2008-07-28 . chapter 1i love your descriptive writing...you never say 'cass feels this or that', i can just tell her emotions from the words :) creepy, and a depressing ending, but it's a great one shot! please keep writing--i wanna read!
~arydesia |
 Koki Enwai 2008-07-28 . chapter 1I love the ending the way that it is, so please don't change it! The creepiness factor is just amazing. It really takes talent to write something like this. Well done!
- Koki |
 8DaysTillSunday 2008-07-28 . chapter 1 Wow. Amazing detail, amazingly written. What else can I say?
It was amazing! |
 insanities 2008-07-28 . chapter 1I definitely think that the ending works - it's my favourite part of this. But the whole story is 'creepy and tense', and I really like the pacing. It's also brilliantly written. :) *adds to favourites* |