I really, really, REALLY love this story. And because my love is so strong for it, I'm gonna go back and read it from the start again, just to get to grips with the characters again.
Another really good chapter. I really liked Mae's little-rant about the real-you of Cade. And the last line was a brilliant ending.
BTW, I also checked out your new webpage about the story and it looks nice. :D I'm looking forward to the other two stories. :)
I simply cannot wait for the next chapter. Hopefully you're all happy with it now and you can get it out quicker. :D

Ooh. Part one. Nice. ANd I'll definitely check out that site you were talking about.

Yeah, sorry I'm reviewing in chapter 8. I already gave a review on chapter 15, so I can't really review again there. So I'll be abusing the un-reviewed chapter 8.

I loved it. Makes for the long wait. And I'm glad the perfect grammar is back. You kinda slacked off with this other chapter, and yeah... But I'm glad with this current chapter. I'm very interested in Dodger~ I can't wait for his series. What oh what does Nicholas mean?? And Zach. Zach, Zach, Zach. That last line of his kinda made me nervous. I need to go read the past chapters a bit. Cade and Mae are lovey as always. And Camille is very lovable when she's with Zach. I like those two together. Their like Gravy's children. Haha.

Gosh. WHy do I always end up with long reviews?

Haha! This is refreshing and hilarious. I love it, the characters are amazing.
And Amen to the fragments!

Ha! Thats funny, I like Zachray and can't wait to read the next chapter

finally got the chance to comment.
I think Mae's okay the way she is. She's supposed to build a character on her own, and she's suppose to control you or something. At least that's what I've read (Because I actually went and googled "how to write a good story". Lame, I know)...

You should just continue, and I prefer OCD. If you're gonna be stressed though, then there's no need to OCD about it. It's terrific either ways.

I absolutely love the "friend" language that you use in these letters. I am completely infatuated with the characters already. That's an amazing job of hooking me into the story within the first few sentences. I'm simply baffled on the fact that you came up with this. It's brilliant, fantastic language and tone. I love it. I'm definitely going to continue reading and can't wait to do so :)

-Kelsey Miranda
(If you have the time. Check out one of my stories. Preferably The Heart That Loves You and/or Hereafter! Thanks!)

A great chapter, as always, but a little shorter than usual. But I completely understand that, seeing as your computer 'bitched' out on you, haha.
Hopefully, there'll be another chapter soon, right? :)

I've been waiting forever! I would get you a new computer if it means faster updates.

And, ooh, Halloween! How exciting. I wonder what Dodger planned. And he definitely gives off that rich boy aura.
I love Cade and Mae's relationship; it's a unique flare to that old love/hate relationship.

ah~ gorillas. I wonder whose inside. Mae's dress sounds gorgeous, by the way.

I like this chapter...
Theres a lot of tension at the beginning, while we wait to find out what they've planned - and it works so so well.

Also...
Love the Mae/Cade love/hate relationship. It's amazing - and although i don't like Mae as a person (don't know why!) You write it so dramatically, it's impossible not to enjoy following what happens to the two of them.

I hope Camille and Andrew become a proper thing soon...
or maybe Zach will find a girl...
I don't know.
But update soon =D

Still my fave FP.
Aurora x

YES! This is my favorite fictionpress story I have stumbled upon. When I first found it, you only had 10 chapters up and after awhile i forgot about it. Yesterday I randomly came back on the site and sat for an hour until I could remember the title of this story. I love your writing style and how the characters are so relateable. It's like I've known them for quite some time, haha. Anyways, I completely love the new chapters and simply cannot wait for the chapters to come! --Savannah

Oh M G!!
i have been waiting for this chapter for so so so long =P
My fave FP in the whole world.

One thing though,
i'm really hoping that the focus of the story doesn't shift to Sherry, Corelleen and the boys who have signed up - as much as it would be good, i just love your main ones far too much =P

Would love to see some more romance!
But i love love love this chapter.
Sorry for the super long review
(got a bit carried away! =] )
Aurora x

This seems like a serious topic. It's nice to see a topic like this every now and then.
Well, I'm beginning to like both Camille and Sherry so that's probably a plus for you.
I love the way you can differentiate the boys from each other. Like this line:
“English.”

“Gravy’s class.”

“My fiancé’s teaching endeavor.”

You can easily tell which one said it. But I feel kind of nervous about the whole war thing. I hope none of the three boys would be sent to England. Or Hawaii.

I reread chapte 12, like you asked and it was just as funny. :) I liked this chapter, even if it was short, but the part about the 'excuse book' made me really laugh. :D
Thanks for making me smile~ :D

ahahahahahahahahahah!!
this story id too too funny!! :P!! it makes me laugh like crazy... the banter and the teacher/trio interactions in particular.
symapathies on that project!!
hope u update soon cuz this fic is to brilliant
cant wait for more
*feverently hopes that was enuff encouragement lol*

Hahahahahahahahah! Omigod!! I almost never review the first chapter of a story, I wait slightly longer but omfg this is so funny!! AHAHAHAAHH!!
I laughed out loud almost a gazillion times during the first chapter only!! Its soo brilliant and the banter is just too... teenagey and guylike...
LOVE IT!!
Its like 1:22 AM in the morning right now so I gotta go sleep but ill deffo read more later.
Just wanted to let you know, you have me captured
Cant wait for more!!
GREAT WORK