i can feel the anxiety. nice job

Amazing description. Love the way it flows. Great job. ^.^

haha totally true! especially the part about jumping up and down, i know when i'm nervous i kind of bounce on the balls of my feet

Very descriptive! And u know... the more i thought about it, the more i realized that running is alot like falling in love. you mastered the description!
Great work! :) (i love smiley faces :)

Wow. This is really good. Short, sweet and to the point. Haha. You explained Nervous pretty well I thought. Excellent job. I really enjoy reading your style. Keep up the good work!

Something I'm dealing with in my own writing right now is trying to portray accurate expression of feeling, as you do here, but also trying to express what makes the picture-that-is-a-poem relevant or special, which I don't think you have here. It needn't be earthshaking, but some special something. Just as an example, I wrote a piece yesterday called "Four Huzzahs!" that at first wasn't going to be funny, but when I got to the end and tacked on the last three lines, it suddenly made the whole thing click. Without those three lines it would lack that special something that I'm talking about...Do you see what I mean? This is good writing you're doing...Now make it great.