I like it, the way it was written is qutie different than I'm used to.

It was quite excellent. In the technical aspects, it flowed and rhymed well, and the style conveyed a lot of energy and speed. It was very forceful in those aspects. Yes it does read a bit like a thesaurus, but the vocabulary suited it well and kept things interesting and molting, despite the use of repetition. As for the artistic, emotional side, I thought it was spot on. I can certainly relate to keeping a facade or masque, concealing my actions sometimes, only to realize that people liked what I had to say. Good poem. I really enjoyed it.

Wow that was amazing! I know how you feel/felt.

i liked this one, too. good job!

I liked this. What I like about your poems that I've read is they rhyme and don't sound stupid. A lot of poems that rhyme are stupid, but yours aren't. You know just how to include rhyme. Good job!

Really powerful and original. It works in a good flow, and you used the right words in the right places.

Hey! It's me. Thank-you for reviewing my poem and so i'm here to review yours... all of them.
I did like this one! It was like a thesaurus, but much more... well, poetic! ;) I really liked how u gradually progressed and made everything flow. The use of a wide vocabulary definitely made this poem intersting!
Keep up the osome work! :)

Of course I liked it! Haha. Another amazing poem. I really like this one. It's so detailed and descript but at the same time you didn't over do it I don't think. Very interesting the way you did it. Such a variety, too! I really didn't see anything to critque. Phenomenal (sp?). You def. have talent. =)

Very good.

This is like a list song.

Never be (too) concerned about sounding like a thesaurus. In fact I don't think you do here...But words are the writer's tools, and you have the right and obligation to always use the best tool for the job.

Luck.