 hairy-mushroom-nose 2009-01-14 . chapter 2Has this been discontinued? It's a nice start! Fast paced (for me!) but still good. Then again you haven't updated anything for ages, I hope you're ok! I guess I haven't read this before, or at least didn't review it, sorry! So far I like Peter. He sounds pretty awesomely nice. |
 vampirezombieduck 2008-09-23 . chapter 2=O
omg new story =D
haven't been on fp recently and then when i do
*poof*
new story =D
sorry for not commenting earlier
update soon ^ ^ |
 lexi v 2008-09-07 . chapter 2gah i could've sworn i reviewed this already :w ?
well anyway i like it, i like jacey he's cool in a screwy way
review soon |
 The Cowardly Lion 2008-09-06 . chapter 2You need to like update something like NOW.
I am so bored...and starved for good stories...it sucks.
o and this is really random but:
OMG still loving this story and also...
I named my pet snapping turtle Havoc. xD |
 DTFsoDTB 2008-08-31 . chapter 2 New Favorite Storyy =))
Continue! |
 hairy-mushroom-nose 2008-08-27 . chapter 1I love the new idea! It's awesome. Even if I am mad at you for not updating your other stories!
A few mistakes but y'know, I forgive you so everyone else better or... I'll kick their ass! I'll read the next chapter tomorrow as I'm tired now :( |
 WTFPillowPants 2008-08-17 . chapter 2 This new story is getting interesting
Defn. Catching my attention!
But I really do miss your other stories!
Please update them son!
=) |
 justin s 2008-08-13 . chapter 1 hey its me, ive been following your stories since sid vicious and i was wondering, if you needed a ne editor, or maybe even a co-editor. i can even beta if you want me to. Email me at or i really hope i can work with you. i edited a story once for a friend of mine., its actually on fictionpress. its called eiffel tower. so like i said, feel free to contact me. My name is Justin by the way |
 mindless impressions 2008-08-05 . chapter 2so i think i could like this story but what about the others im hooked on the whole will we last series pleas pleas please bring it back lol |
 Esquirella 2008-08-05 . chapter 2Jacey's so random and dangerous for Rory. I really want to see where the crazy man takes the poor kid though. |
 just give me november 2008-08-04 . chapter 2this is strange. i'll keep reading. :] |
 marymakeascenexx 2008-08-04 . chapter 2 Ha, its because your storys are amazing
& i always want you to write more.
=D
but this chapter was entertaining fersure.
amazingly written as usual.
update soon =D
im really intrested in this story.
&whats witht he girl?
is she just going to stay there O.o
&as for other stories to update?
well i love all 3 of your new ones.
espically cassidy or sid ones =D
but update whatever story you can of course.
your the amazing writer woman? xD |
 danniiDISASTER 2008-08-04 . chapter 2New chapter, verdict, 5 Stars!
hahaha I love this story already, its really interesting.
Poor Skag had to stirp down lol
and the creepy girl in the corner >.>
I'll be waiting for the next chapter!
~Danielle |
 sasuke-naruto-forever 2008-07-30 . chapter 1I'm so confused but I love it XD |
 Esquirella 2008-07-29 . chapter 1That was an awesome start! Can't wait to see how Jacey and Skag develop. |