There is really strong imagery in this. I really liked it. Tangible sky, Webs around eternity. Nice job.

i really like this
the wording has this alluring feel to it

That does seem quite soothing. Yay for not writing for a long time. I'm not sure if "wonderful" is needed, I think the adjective is superfluous when the rest of your poem describes it so well.
I like the fourth verse best. I don't know why. Maybe I just feel like liking it.

This sounds like an introduction to a book or story. I like the darkness of the poem (what can I say, I'm attracted to dark things...) Is it odd to say that I also see not a sense of relief, what's the word, a sense of comfort (?) in this. Like by embracing the darkness within, they (or whomever) can finally make peace with themselves...or maybe I'm just overthinking things. O.o Anyways, love the poem, and I'm glad to see you're writing again.

Oh, one typo:

"and the birds sing
sad songs that weaves
webs around eternity"

the weaves should be weave.

-uskohakuchan

Dark, bordering on creepy (*smiles*)... but I love it!

"... take you to the garden of death
Where the trees touch the tangible sky
and the birds sing
sad songs that weave
webs around eternity"

That's my favorite part. The beauty of it made me shiver, I swear...

Great job, as usual! So glad that you're back, I wish I could still write too. Though, we all know poetry's not my forte... lol

Amazing, as usual
=)

That was so wonderfully eerie...i've got goose bumps.

Wow.

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That was good. A little dark, but definitely not in a bad way.

Yay!