|Reviews for Abuse|
| Guardian Soul 8/8/08 . chapter 1
I think it flows pretty well...Maybe, though, instead of having it all bunched together, you could separate it a little more. Like taking the parts in parenthesis and moving them down a line. I find that helps the flow when your reading sometimes.
| CigaretteBurn 8/6/08 . chapter 1
amazing poem. i don't know why you don't like the flow, i like it, i think it adds to the poem.
and using harvey dent quotes - MORE AMAZING
i have seen that movie 3 times already and i can't get enough of it )
| Faith Adeline 7/28/08 . chapter 1
I'm sorry you don't like it, but I do. Just my opinion. Keep it up :)
| Jennifer 7/28/08 . chapter 1
Man, that movie was freakin' awesome. This peice is good, just not 'goodgoodgood' like you're other ones.
-please don't hit me for that!-
| Rock Music is my Muse 7/28/08 . chapter 1
Beautiful piece, but a little scary. If you need to talk or anything, I'm here.