Oh, I like this one. I like the feeling of slumber that is expressed through the mentions of death ("dead lands," "once, long ago, lived," "bones," "entombed") and the repetition of how "I lie." It all gives me an image of a rocky, misty, somewhat barren yet untouched landscape. I really like the feeling of it. :)

I like this poem! I think the style is good, and you actually got a bit of rhyme in there. I especially like how the first words spelled out 'Here, there be dragons.' It's just an all around awesome poem! ^.^