I love this story. Can't wait for the next chapter even though it'll probably come in the next month.
;)

hi, i've got to say, i love this story and "the make out games"!! however, this story really confuses me. like the transition from the hospital stuff to the library... hopefully, you will clear that out in the future... that, and other than a few grammatical errors, the writing is pretty good.. i love the characterisation and just in case you are wondering, i am a Noah fan! Ace is Such an Ass! :)

Gotta love NaNoWriMo, huh? I'm probably gonna participate sometime, but not this year probably. I'm liking Jace, a lot, and possibly that he and Alyssa would make a good couple in the end.. Would it happen, I wonder? By the sounds of it, she has a bit of a thing for him, and that bone structure. ;)

Ok, so I was very excited to see that you posted :) I don't know what it is about these characters, but they're so addicting.

I am still one hundred percent a die-hard Noah fan, so when I saw his 'suggestion' to date them simultaneously I wanted to scream. Not just at Noah for even reccommending it but then at Hailey. I mean come on girl! Who's the one in the picture you've been staring at?! You even admitted to saying you would have been a thing earlier had it not been for the distance and Ace. But whatever I guess, I'll let her get over her thing with Ace and hope she goes to Noah like she should.

Also, I'm getting very curious about what Noah's note said as with who took the pictures. While previously I thought that it wouldn't be Ava because it was just too obvious, I may reconsider. While I still think it would be kind of obvious, I re-read the end before starting this chapter and the part commenting on how the older picture was folded could hint to her having seen the picture while at Noah's and she tok it in secret, having to fold it to hide it.

So while I don't know I'll have quite the compassion with the sotry about Alyssa as I do with this story, I think I will give it a try, and I hope you get a chance to add on to this pretty soon :)

LOVE IT!

ah im so stoked

Hey! You didn't send this to me. I'm hurt. :(

Anyway, I didn't get the point of the mono epidemic part...not at all. It just kind of hindered the flow of the story.

Oh! I'm so going to friend you inkpop...my name is the same on there, minus the periods. :P

ooh! Urgh its fustrating that Jace and Hailey won't be together! I mean you have to admit it would make things a lot more interesting and Jace already said Hailey ha a way of making guys fall for her! Shee could totally do it to him too, forget allie. Um has Hailey forgotten about Ava already?? What about Noah?? He wants to date Hailey and Ava while Hailey also date Ace. And okay I have to say it I always feel like if the characters name have something in common like the first syllables rhyming then they're meant to be together, well it's usuyally with the same first letter, but wateves! Im sad that you won't be updating soon :(

i cant imagine hailey dating noah nace the same time. but i prefer hailey with noah

great chapter. I love Hailey's last sentence haha.
Jace seems pretty intereseting :)
hope you update this soon!

cant wait till nxt chapter

Great story. Favorite character : Ace
Least Facorite Character : Leah

Keep making more chapters!

Ava seems like a creepier. I don't know what to think of her because she seems like the kind of person that killed kittens as a child.

I don't want that on my back.

Fictional or not. She is still scary.

This is getting really complicated and not knowing the boys way of thinking (if they ever do) isn't helping. Maybe she would be better off if another guy replaced all three of them!

Please update soon

What did the note say? And I smell an angry Ava coming along possibly? That should be fun to read if she does.. And it was so sweet that Ace broke up with Leah to get with Hailey-if only he did so sooner, then it would have worked out. ;D

Wow..poor Noah. But at least he learned his lesson now, I'd have to say the same for Ace. But for the record, I'm still team Noah!! What a wonderful birthday, wouldn't you say? What did Noah do to his girlfriend now? And Lucas..he always comes into play too, how will he turn out?