Very well written. The rhyme scheme and rhythm fit nicely together. I can physically feel the words.

I love it. You're rhyming is good. Overall is just a really well written poem. Good job. Keep up the great writing. :)

And if you got the time, you should check out my poems and reviews are always appreciated. :)

Wow. This is amazing. I love the rhyming in this, too. Very good work.

I thought it was great, the use of rhymes without fading away from the main topic was well written, except for one small thing I noticed, that the structure could use a little work, like the number of syllables in each line... other than that, it's amazing work, keep writing!
~Lurid~