|Reviews for He's Goodbye|
| a silenced revolution 8/10/08 . chapter 1
i like the word choice you've used here: "turquoise dreams", "dark regret", "star-white camera flashes" and so on. it really makes the poem. well done, good work.
| Tranquil Thorns 8/3/08 . chapter 1
Beautifully written; I like your style already.
To me this is a bittersweet poem, though the ending stanza is a little saddening.
All in all, I love your use of imagery.