I love this song, I can relate directly to it and I would love to hear it over the radio one day and be able to sing along with. Keep it up!

Wristband

The idea of organising the mind is a nice one. The subject is something many can relate to and I love the last stanza. So overall it's nicely done :)

I would switch the moment and second line, only because I think of a moment as longer than a second and I think it would make sense for it to go from least amount of time needed to most amount of time needed.

Other than that I like it, the rhyming flows well, I like the chorus part and I like how the last stanza works with the chorus. The subject matter is really relateable, nicely done.

I really love it. The rhymthm is great. I like the theme. Overall it's a really good song!! Bravo.

And if you got the time, you should check out my poems. :)

'twas reallyreallyreally good.

nice job.