It's a cute poem, I liked it.

Aww! I love it! I especially love how u tied in all the old fairy stories (go figure), and not only that, u made it flow!! Finally! Someone who does that! I have no clue why, but in everything, including art, if it doesn't blend, it's not right.
You did good!

it's really cute and I like looking for all the characters in the stories that you wove into your poem. nice job!