Amazing writing. You could potentially turn this into a longer story. Have this be a prologue and then have her wake up in say a year but have him already be in a different relationship and go from there. Idk just an idea. But I really liked reading this.

I LOVE this. It has the potential of a full-on chapter story. You should continue this. I"m sure it would be a good hit.

i've had this in my inbox for ages and i never got around to reading it till now, but it's good. very good. i like it tons.

The ending wasn't cheesy, yet somehow optimistic nevertheless. It left me wanting to know more about him and Anna, but I guess they call 'em oneshots for a reason,eh?
Cheers!

I know this isn't exactly the 'OMIGAWD YOU'RE AWAKE! *PROFESSES UNDYING LOVE ONCE MORE*' type ending but I like that you left some sort of hope for us optimists out there. =D Thanks! Nicely written, by the way!

gulistanlik

so sad :(